Music Trade Review

Issue: 1914 Vol. 59 N. 1

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THE MUSIC TRADE REVIEW
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A CRITICAL ANALYSIS OF RECENT RETAIL ADVERTISING.
A Department Interesting to Men Who Wish Real Criticism Regarding Publicity—Perfect Freedom Exercised in
Treatment of Advertising Matter—Aimed to Raise Standard of Retail Music Trade Advertising.
Conducted by GLAD. HENDERSON.
In the recent announcement in The Review of a
critical-constructive advertising service to dealers,
wherein it was requested that merchants send in
their retail advertisements for criticism, tending
towards greater efficiency of the sales power of
type messages, it was not expected that such a
large number of these would be mailed and the
writer apologizes now for any delay that was ne-
cessary to properly analyze the many displays.
We also repeat that the service of this bureau is
is no excuse for changing the type style here. be at the top, putting "from the factory to, the fire-
What's "The" doing there in big type, unless it is side, Wissner pianos" under the cut, "The Mu-
trying to pull attention away from the name of the sician's Choice" to be under "Wissner pianos." The
piano and the house name? The name and address panel is superfluous, for the text in the panel is
directly connective to the opening body matter
should be in Cheltenham, much smaller in size, and
properly placed under the body matter. Two and paragraph. The panel in advertisements is for the
use of text that is of different character to the
one-half inches of space absolutely wasted. Large-
fundamental topic; for instance, the Victor panel
ness of type does not mean legibility, although a
is correctly used, while the panel just mentioned is
number of people seem to think so.
not. This is another of the "all of our line" type
And while we are right here on piano illustra-
tions, look at No. 2, which is ten inches, three col- of copy, amounting to practically a list of the goods
umns. Notice how the use of a half-tone on the carried with prices, which is of reminding charac-
right gives a lop-sided appearance in trying to bal- ter rather than of forcible selling assistance.
It was not our intention when starting this serv-
ance the line drawings. The Howard half-tone
ice to reproduce advertisements which are consid-
should go in the center, although in following out
the three-panel idea it is wise to use all line cuts. ered nearly perfect, but there is a lesson portrayed
in the reproduction of the Sterling advertisement,
The underscoring in the third panel retards read-
No. 5, which should be given to every dealer. This
ing, giving a cloudy effect, as rules should be used
advertisement occupies thirty-two inches of space,
for emphasis under one or two words in the aver-
age sentence. "Piano Opportunities'' should be in set three columns wide, and we show it to empha-
size the fact that dealers should capitalize current
Cheltenham—not Gothic. The use of the side rules
topics, and newspaper clippings relating to music
crowds the copy. Putting the Howard display in
by reproduction in appropriate form and linking
the center and paneling it, eliminating side rules,
their house and goods to the news. Create an in-
and following the foregoing suggestions, would
terest in your ho.use—make people talk about you—
greatly strengthen this showing.
Although No. 3 is taken from a paper that is six and the more favorable talk that you say or print,
the quicker you will be recognized in the trade po-
months old, it is used to illustrate what is created
sition that you seek. For a city the size of Brook-
for copy when the newspaper solicitor comes in
and "gets an ad." A great many dealers are up lyn we dislike the use of the phrase "Open eve-
nings by appointment," not alone for its signifi-
against this problem—that of intelligent and
cance, but from the fact that it is doubtful if it has
proper advertising—and we are sorry to say that
they must work out their own salvation, as far as selling strength. It costs a lot of money to keep
depending upon most
newspapers for aid.
BABY GRAND PIANO
This is, in every sense
""THE smallest grand piano in the world-Mi victory over
of the word, a bare
« price, size and tone! It costs no more than a good
statement of generali-
upright It occupies no more floor space than an upright.
Bat the Brambach tone and action stamp it as a true grand
ties and a waste of
—the ideal pianoj The "Sheraton" or "Colonial" models
space.
A salesman
c w be conveniently secured by a payment of $50.00.
working for the Jones
Rosquist, Killen Co.
who would make such
statements and then
walk away from the
prospect would be dis-
charged, and yet the
221 SOUTH FIRST STREET
firm says the same
Opposite Theatre De Luxe
thing, has it printed
No. 1—Background Showing Use of Piano in
and distributed all over
Library Is Too Heavily Drawn and Clouds
the city, because it is
the Outline of the Piano.
"advertising." We be-
The Weylen Piano
not creative; for example, we received several re-
lieve that "advertising"
quests from subscribers to "write a few piano ads
is the most misinter-
for us" and we were obliged to explain the boun-
preted word in the dic-
daries of our province as applied to this advertis-
tionary.
ing service. For creative work secure an adveitis-
The statements here
ing man, to whom you will pay a rational fee, and
The Weylen is indeed "a
The smallest perfect A Player-Piano of
should
have been run
put your problems up to him.
Piano of quality" — and Baby Grand ever pro-
in a series of five ads, its reputation has been duced.
perfect action, ex-
But it will pay you to give the same scrutiny to
achieved through merit
Wonderful in the vol-
your advertising counsel, before you engage him, each one devoted to
one of the particular
alone. The Weylen tone ume and richness of its cellent tone and un-
as you would to a contemplated private secretary,
Is a feature that we pre- tone, and artistic in de- usual durability.
topics.
No
type
ar-
for he holds almost as many of the inside details
B e n t to discriminating sign. Although its price
rangement
comment
is
of your business as yourself. Most business men
buyers—the Weylen, a Pi- is lower than that of any E n d o r s e d by all
necessary,
for
it
is
very
will hire an advertising man on the meet-kiss-
ano that fulfills every de- other Baby Grand, it has
faulty.
marry-in-ten-minutes order, while from the office
who use them.
mand made upon it.
no superior.
No. 4, occupying nine
boy he will require references from the time he
inches, double column,
was born up to the morning that he comes into the
is another o.f those
store. This is no joke, for we have seen instances
There is a great deal we might say in favor of the above offerings. But
"everything we have in
of similar discrepancies.
we know that Pianos are bought only after the most careful investigation, and
stock
for
sale"
adver-
There is considerable discussion as to the vaiue
f we feel confident that comparison will convince you that you will get the most
tisements, foil o w i n g [ for your money in buying here.
of visualizing the environment of a piano in illus-
trations designed to show a particular style of an the four-ring circus
idea of all-in-evidence,
instrument, and the reproduction of advertisement
but "seeing nothing."
No. 1 (120 lines, double column) is to show how
Five styles of type used
not to do it, for here the background is drawn so
heavily that it is difficult to clearly see the outline when two styles are
WATKIN BUILDING, 1205 ELM STREET
plenty.
The heavy,
of the style. To be effective, backgrounds should
Near Murphy—
fancy rule kills "from
be very lightly drawn—bare suggestions—playing
No. 2—Use of Half-Tone Illustration at Right Throws Display Out of
the factory to the fire-
up the style of the instrument in a clear, sharp
Balance—Incorrect Use of Underscoring.
manner; "$50.00" should be in Cheltenham, as there side." This cut should
The Brambach
that can't be equaled elsewhere in Dallas
...THE...
San Jose Eilers Music House
$270
ALL SOLD ON CONVENIENT, EASY-PAYMENT TERNS
WILL A. WATKIN CO.
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THE MUSIC TRADE REVIEW
unusual always comes
in the shape of a new
lesson that has to be
learned. The plan back
of
an advertisement is
BROOKLYN'S BEST KNOWN
more important than
PIANO HOOSE
the copy itself, and the
bchmidt Music Co., in
Music as a nerve tonic or stimulator doesn't
grouping this lot of six
only apply to youth, but has always had its greatest
players, offers a specific
influence for good when made a lifelong possession.
lot of goods in a good-
It is one of the greatest investments that can
sized space that can-
be made, yielding the largest kind of dividends in
not be overlooked, and
pleasure, happiness, encouragement and consola-
tion.
copy of this force gen-
erally accomplishes its
It is a builder and protector of
Dr
the real American home—an en-
purpose.
No doubt
_
AS A KKARTEirBR,
mlrt courager of. life's highest ideals—an
there are six people in
Like th« m l l n g of Gibraltar t« the Mat
instigator of patriotism — and an
file
ordcnl of •xamin*tlou« to hundred* cldei
Davenport who want a
armor against failure or evil.
of tboutandi la the lecondary schools pled
player and would avai'.
and rollers* At rdwtial air* cn- moil
You can't invest in anything
tourtro tha ralllunr. «rcan reeitftlt °t
themselves of this op-
that will bring more lasting good to
now put heart Into th« men who go qul*
portunity, particularly
up to (heir examination* nt Harvard. tlom the graduate just starting in life
than a
Orcanilt Divisor of that university's rmbl
so as expressed by this
no !•
dlvliion o( music, finds that marches, rep
dignified and truthful
scherzos, an occasional fujire. and. of • b
course. HAKDCL'S Largo played In
piece of p u b l i s ' h e d
Apnleton Chapel on tha mornings
salesmanship.
Ourlnc- tlio final examination period
put spurs lo the spirits and nerve
Set in Pabst, w'th
them fot the trial.
wide margins, of text
Mr. DATISON ids not ask the psychol-
ogists whether his scheme was
or Playerpiano.
that has been clipped
scientific, but applied It directly to
of superfluous English,
the students They My It works
In them you have an instru-
splendidly We hear It ha* prevented
ment possessing over half a cen-
it is well balanced for
nervous prostrations at Wellejtoy
tury of absolute reliability, indis-
easy reading. (The
If the plan works, why consult, the
putable reputation, unquestioned
psychologists?
following is for the
artistic attainment and a* service
Books '-* S U I T -
" — «o •"'-'
that insures lasting pleasure and
paper's
proofreader:
THX NEW TORK TIME*
satisfaction.
Should be comma after
"world"; period after
These are facts known to thousands of owners,
and when you consider the moderate and honest
"assured"; capital "C"
prices, the simple terms of payment, and the actual
for "coupled," w i t h
help we will give you, there can be no reason why
colon after "to-mor-
you should delay in making such an easily cared for
investment.
row.")
The Schmidt Music
You will be put to no obligation if you allow
us to explain a proposition we have for the graduate.
Co. ranks as "Iowa's
Oldest Music House,"
Are you acquainted with the special ad- #
vantages of our Victrola Department?—Our*
being established in
service is unusual and stands first in Brodklyn as
1862 and incorporated
most helpful and convenient for the Musician.
in 1901. It operates
three
stores—one each
Optn Evening! by Appointment
in Davenport, Musca-
tine and Washington—
the officers of the or-
ganization being Her-
Manufacturer
- IOSY-SO
Wholesale and Retail Wueroomn: STERLING BUILPTNG.
mann Schmidt, presi-
: «18-4»0 Fullou Street Corner Hanover paos. Brooklyn—
dent ; Ernst Schmidt,
No. 5—Showing How to Adopt Current Topics Into Powerful Argumenta- vice-president, and Ju-
tive Advertising Combining a News Value to a Timely Class of Prospects. lius A. Schmidt, secrc-
open evenings, and piano salesmen are not auto-
tary and treasurer.
matic machine tenders. It is "how" they utilize the
The company took exception to a criticism of
average business day that counts.
one of its advertisements which appeared in a pre-
And while we are right here, talking about two vious series, but upon being given the rules and
pieces of Brooklyn advertising copy, it wouldn't be laws governing the advertising principles back of
amiss to remark that there is a great field in this the criticism sent in another letter as follows:
territory of 2,000,000 people for piano business.
"I am indeed glad to receive your letter of May
Evidently Brooklyn is not well covered by piano 29 and carefully note the comments and criticisms
dealers, for approximately 40 per cent, of the busi- contained therein, and I wish to thank you very
ness transacted by New York dealers are sales much for the effort you put forth in going into de-
made to Brooklyn residents. Brooklyn dealers may tail, as you did.
not be familiar with these conditions, so it is a
"I know you will be glad to know that your let-
good thing that they should know this.
ter contained just what I was reaching out for, and
Skipping about the country, we'll take an Ore- I certainly join you in the last paragraph of this
gon advertisement, No. 0, which is nine inches, letter, and it is indeed true that one may make one
double column. This is of "educational"' type, de- feel happier to pat him on the back and say that
signed to create an interest in a piano by forcibly
everything is fine, but indeed he would not be
reminding members of the family that their home helped in the least unless he were told the truth.
is the logical place for living, and that the future I am beginning to find out that what I do not know
of the family depends upon home ties, which is a about advertising would fill a book, but I am at
topic that is of vital interest. Side rules should be least going to find out some of the fundamentals
eliminated; the little pieces of "border" in the cut that help to make good advertising.
should have been cut out; cut should be at top
"Again thanking you for the kindness, I beg to
with heading under cut; name in reverse name- remain,
(Signed) "E. A. SCHMIDT."
plate should be straight across; how Shepherd pi-
That this service is the first real advertising as-
anos can complete the home circle ought to be con- sistance given to the trade is acknowledged; and,
nected with the topic discussed. The name "Shep- recognized as such, it is highly endorsed by the
herd" could be admirably worked up into a catch- many piano merchants who believe in efficient sales-
ing slogan for use in this copy.
manship.
No. 7 is seventeen inches, three columns, pub-
As far as the actual copy of an advertisement is
lished by one of the livest houses in the trade. It concerned, the lesson to be gleaned from the fore-
shows a plan of merchandising that is seldom util- going reproductions is that advertising is nothing
ized in this industry; one which has been advo- more than printed conversation. Talk in your
cated by the writer to a number of dealers, but advertisements just as you would to a prospect,
they couldn't see the point, for the reason that the and be careful that you say just enough. If you
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FROM THE'FACTORY TO THE FIRESIDE 3jj
WISSNER PIANOS!
Make It a Lifetime
Heartener to the
GRADUATE
STERLING
PIANO
The Musician's Choice
The social as well as the artistic world uses them. To
the majority of buyers the question of economy is only inci-
dental—quality is paramount. They prefer the WISSNER
because musically and mechanically it has no superior.
Those who have hesitated to buy a piano Wause they
could not afford the very best are invited to call, and they
will be surprised at the reasonableness of our prices and terms;
THE UNRIVALLED WISSNER, AT
$450
THE CELEBRATED LECKEKLING. AT SSO
THE POPULAR REINHARD, AT
250
S THE PLAYER PIANO
[ [solves the problem of home entertainment
J for all time. It reveals the delights of the
J | master works of the world and unites the
; j family and your friends to the enjoyment of
}{ the latest dances. The Wissner Player Pianos
are simply beyond comparison with instru-
A ments offered elsewhere at the sa,me price—
w sold on easy monthly payments.
B
X WISSNER PLAYER PIANOS, AT $875 & UP
X LECHERUNG"
"
AT 650
& REINHARD "
-
AT 550
(j
Victors
Victrolas
Complete
Slock ol
Machines and
Records
Victrolas,
H 5 to JZOO
Victors,
SPECIAL:
$10 to $100
MNew Upright Piano, reliable) $ 1 7 C
g make
( $ lltf
J !New 88;Note Player
i i reliable, up-to-date
Piano
S eo»d-Pri>o(
Dtmonslr«U»
Roomi
375
WISSNER PIANO WAREROOMS.
E5 and 57 Flalbush Ave.. BROOKLYN.
No. 4—Emphasizing Several Faults; Incorrect
Use of Top Panel; Too Many Type Styles
and Poor Position of Illustration.
don't know when you have said enough—and you
know that some sales are not closed because o.f
over-talking, just the same as they are for "under-
(Continued on page 14.)
The Sterling Piano c o .
FOR
Christmas
Beautiful
Stock
of
Beit
Makes Pianos and
Players
LOWEST PRICK
TERMS TO SUIT
Every Instrument
Is Absolutely
Guaranteed
OPEN EVENINGS UNTIL
CHRISTMAS
Jones, Rospist, Killen to,
Seattle's Home Piano Dealers
1510 Third Avenue
Between Pike and Pine
No. 3—An Advertisement That Is Not Sales-
manship. Of Reminding Value Only and
Without Force. Just an " A d . "

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